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A Suit of Brass
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09-05-2013, 01:25 PM
Thanks for all the comments everybody. Indeed I know I have problems with the punctuation as English is a second language. As for the poem, it's about a bullet, about to be fired. The suit of brass is the bullet's casing, the tunnel and the coffin are the barrel of the firearm and the whole poem is from the POV of the shooter. I'll see if I can find someone to help me work on it a little bit. I appreciate your criticism.
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A Suit of Brass - by Drecher - 09-04-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by rowens - 09-05-2013, 01:02 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 07:53 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by LittleOwl - 09-05-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Reilley - 09-05-2013, 08:43 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Drecher - 09-05-2013, 01:25 PM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Savanna - 09-05-2013, 09:01 PM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by ruagun - 09-06-2013, 09:26 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Elsie Fillmore - 09-06-2013, 09:33 AM
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