09-05-2013, 08:37 AM
it seems as though youre just ranting.
i also agree with PP and if you had titled it something along the lines of 'after the doctor called..' i would probably have read deeper.
you do seem talented. although, it seems as though your poems are too personal therefore youre readers are unable to really relate.
look forward to reading more
and if i could add one more thing?
your random capitalization of "i" was a bit distracting.
i also agree with PP and if you had titled it something along the lines of 'after the doctor called..' i would probably have read deeper.
you do seem talented. although, it seems as though your poems are too personal therefore youre readers are unable to really relate.
look forward to reading more
and if i could add one more thing?
your random capitalization of "i" was a bit distracting.