A Suit of Brass
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It's a skeleton with no meat and no blood, not even any bones. It's a toy you're playing with. It sounds nice, most of the lines run kind of smooth and have music. But it's a plastic music, like those fake flutes they call "recorders" they give you in school. This sounds like a poem you'd write in high school. An American high school, too.
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A Suit of Brass - by Drecher - 09-04-2013, 09:17 PM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by rowens - 09-05-2013, 01:02 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 07:53 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by LittleOwl - 09-05-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Reilley - 09-05-2013, 08:43 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Drecher - 09-05-2013, 01:25 PM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Savanna - 09-05-2013, 09:01 PM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by ruagun - 09-06-2013, 09:26 AM
RE: A Suit of Brass - by Elsie Fillmore - 09-06-2013, 09:33 AM



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