08-31-2013, 11:59 PM
I don't like the fact that you rhyme randomly. Try it without any rhymes I think it would be better that way. The rhythm shifts back and forth also.
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As the Gods of Man Reclaim Earth - by metalfan91 - 08-26-2013, 07:29 AM
RE: As the Gods of Man Reclaim Earth - by Todd - 08-27-2013, 06:35 AM
RE: As the Gods of Man Reclaim Earth - by FayandFire - 08-27-2013, 10:19 AM
RE: As the Gods of Man Reclaim Earth - by metalfan91 - 08-28-2013, 02:09 PM
RE: As the Gods of Man Reclaim Earth - by jdguyb - 08-31-2013, 11:59 PM
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