08-30-2013, 06:29 PM
Hey Milo,
Great short story. One smal typo I spotted on third last paragraph. I thought I saw (saa)
Have you written many short stories? I think you have done a great job with this one. Loved the gradual shift of vision concerning the nature of Chandra. Nicely done.
AJ.
Great short story. One smal typo I spotted on third last paragraph. I thought I saw (saa)
Have you written many short stories? I think you have done a great job with this one. Loved the gradual shift of vision concerning the nature of Chandra. Nicely done.
AJ.