08-24-2013, 04:09 PM
You have something good to work with here. Much of your other posted poetry has shown plenty of promise, but is is a shame that you are not entering into the full experiance of this site and giving yourself the opportunity to improve.
I notice that you have made a total of 8 posts, 6 of which have been putting up new poems (all of them into crit threads) but you have only offered 2 crits by reply (and both of these comments were not actually offering the other poet anything to improve thier poems). You have recieved some fair advice on your posted poems (but to date have only undertaken one edit). Finally you are missing out on making some new friends and having the support of this group, in that you do not ever thank your readers for taking the time and trouble to give thier time on your poem. Do you really think you are being fair to others? Equally, instead of a hit n run mentality, give it a try - hang around. Read some of the crit on other poems and watch how others develop thier poems...and then see what you can do with your poems. As I said above they have plenty of promise.
Please read the site rules concerning offering other poets some meaningful thoughts on thier poems.
I notice that you have made a total of 8 posts, 6 of which have been putting up new poems (all of them into crit threads) but you have only offered 2 crits by reply (and both of these comments were not actually offering the other poet anything to improve thier poems). You have recieved some fair advice on your posted poems (but to date have only undertaken one edit). Finally you are missing out on making some new friends and having the support of this group, in that you do not ever thank your readers for taking the time and trouble to give thier time on your poem. Do you really think you are being fair to others? Equally, instead of a hit n run mentality, give it a try - hang around. Read some of the crit on other poems and watch how others develop thier poems...and then see what you can do with your poems. As I said above they have plenty of promise.
Please read the site rules concerning offering other poets some meaningful thoughts on thier poems.