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Rabbit haiku
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08-23-2013, 10:32 AM
(08-19-2013, 03:27 AM)Bunx Wrote: sleeping in grass it's pretty good bunx, if you can try and make the last ine or two take a different approach. so they play off against what's already been said. a suggestion would be sleeping in grass rabbit without tail my good luck great effort |
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Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-19-2013, 03:27 AM
RE: Rabbit haiku - by ChristopherSea - 08-19-2013, 04:09 AM
RE: Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-19-2013, 10:15 AM
RE: Rabbit haiku - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 09:09 AM
RE: Rabbit haiku - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:32 AM
RE: Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 01:01 AM
RE: Rabbit haiku - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:04 AM
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