Parachuting

[btrudo]

Lingerie billows
in descent to ecstasy
amidst perfumed whirl

If you are trying for the Japanese essence, you probably want to avoid words like ecstasy--the image and juxtapositions should bring about the emotion. Also the action isn't crisply worded, though right now, I can't write anything remotely in the spirit needed for this, so I can't really offer another look into this.