08-23-2013, 03:05 AM
(08-21-2013, 04:22 AM)jr_jeremiah Wrote: how can words state your beauty?
how can minds explain my song?
why must fate be so unruly?
and why must hearts lead us wrong?
did you know what you were doing?
did you know it all along?
just a fool fit for your musing,
was i? extranjero soon gone?
how should i then write my verses?
should i feign a calm resolve?
could i forget what this earth is?
forget the sound of adam’s fall?
were you happy in that moment?
were those doubts for a second hung?
was it lust? a liquor more potent
you had tasted on your tongue?
and how the hell do they live?
these others – do they not know?
did they never their souls give?
do they worship another? why so?
is there anything left for me?
or does this void consume men whole?
with the defeated i now march
reliving memories, alone.
you should write your verse without all those question marks, that's how.