Mentor: Generic love poem
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Hi bunx
i'm not sure i can give you silk purses but i will try my best :J:

first a couple of questions.

in one or two sentences tell me what your aim is with the poem?

what kind of feeling do you want to convey?

so far i get it's about height and how it affects you (not you, the narrator) when trying to chat women up.
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Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-22-2013, 01:46 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-23-2013, 06:32 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:21 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-23-2013, 11:03 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-23-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Josho - 08-23-2013, 04:05 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-24-2013, 02:30 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 02:58 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-24-2013, 05:31 PM



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