08-22-2013, 01:46 PM
Hi bunx
i'm not sure i can give you silk purses but i will try my best :J:
first a couple of questions.
in one or two sentences tell me what your aim is with the poem?
what kind of feeling do you want to convey?
so far i get it's about height and how it affects you (not you, the narrator) when trying to chat women up.
i'm not sure i can give you silk purses but i will try my best :J:
first a couple of questions.
in one or two sentences tell me what your aim is with the poem?
what kind of feeling do you want to convey?
so far i get it's about height and how it affects you (not you, the narrator) when trying to chat women up.
