Color Me
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(08-21-2013, 02:11 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  See the pale pink plastic bin?
in back is a home befitting
one black spider; beautiful--
I will bleach her later, awesome alliteration! i feel bad for the spider, hopefully he is out to lunch
as to not hear the crunch.

I moon, an artful relief,
realizing my week, not new,
recycled like an old man's
tattered pants, twisting one out to Kant pretty sure your making a reference to Emanuel Kant? Not sure? did Kants deaths have to do with a limp dick, ah i wish i knew the reference
before his heart cramps, limp dicked.

I will not listen to death,
but there is fun in watching them "Them" is an interesting world, when you say "them" do the mean the deceased?
writhe, squirm, finally fluoresce.


Color her cornered,
color him confused.
Color her barren,
color him bruised.
Really enjoyed this poem. I wish i could offer more of the structural and rhythmic side of the poem, but regardless i found the poem easy to read yet mysterious. I think if i knew a little bit more about the reference to Kant i would understand the poem on a deeper level. Anyways! awesome post.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
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Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-21-2013, 02:11 PM
RE: Color Me - by billy - 08-21-2013, 04:26 PM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-21-2013, 04:34 PM
RE: Color Me - by billy - 08-21-2013, 04:41 PM
RE: Color Me - by TheWall0912 - 08-21-2013, 08:49 PM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 12:15 AM
RE: Color Me - by Todd - 08-22-2013, 12:50 AM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 01:09 AM
RE: Color Me - by Bunx - 08-22-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 09:11 AM



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