08-22-2013, 02:47 AM
Thewall.
these poems usually put me on edge. but this one has a strange calming effect
"My thoughts hidden inside my head,
unable to make their way
onto the paper
that loved ones will read."
to relate this to a personal experience.
When I was dipicote (SP?) i felt like i could not articulate anything. writing a poem was impossible. this was by far the darkest time in my adult life. I felt but could not say how I felt.
You captured this emotion so well in the poem. like having chains on your fingers and your lips, helpless to ones former intellect.
This is a good poem the wall thanks for the post
these poems usually put me on edge. but this one has a strange calming effect
"My thoughts hidden inside my head,
unable to make their way
onto the paper
that loved ones will read."
to relate this to a personal experience.
When I was dipicote (SP?) i felt like i could not articulate anything. writing a poem was impossible. this was by far the darkest time in my adult life. I felt but could not say how I felt.
You captured this emotion so well in the poem. like having chains on your fingers and your lips, helpless to ones former intellect.
This is a good poem the wall thanks for the post
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx