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Color Me
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  (in connection with the him)i'm not a master when it comes to punctuation so i can only say how all the commars affect me  back to the hymn, why segregate it from the poem with an hr line? why not leave a little extra line spaces. i think the first line is okay and the 2nd line could be [in its back a home befitting] |
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Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-21-2013, 02:11 PM
RE: Color Me - by billy - 08-21-2013, 04:26 PM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-21-2013, 04:34 PM
RE: Color Me - by billy - 08-21-2013, 04:41 PM
RE: Color Me - by TheWall0912 - 08-21-2013, 08:49 PM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 12:15 AM
RE: Color Me - by Todd - 08-22-2013, 12:50 AM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 01:09 AM
RE: Color Me - by Bunx - 08-22-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: Color Me - by newsclippings - 08-22-2013, 09:11 AM
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