08-21-2013, 04:34 PM
I dunno about the commas. Maybe I should let up?
I had quite a bit of trouble with the first two lines. There's another version where I call out "Hark!"
Because why not?
I thought the last four lines might be read as a hymn, that's how I said them in my head.
I had quite a bit of trouble with the first two lines. There's another version where I call out "Hark!"
Because why not?
I thought the last four lines might be read as a hymn, that's how I said them in my head.
I'll be there in a minute.