Ranting

[Bunx]

This is my very first attempt at poetry; therefore, it is free verse and more like narrating than poem.

Have i told you yet?
I dream of you
Tirelessly, endlessly, and continuously.
Have i told you yet?

I want
To hear your voice,
To see your smile,
To hold your hand,
And never let you go.

Have i told you yet,
About this odd feeling?
It is there,always.
Playing, sleeping, and studying
Not once, has it gone away.

Have i told you yet?
I am
Captured, strangled, and tortured
By my own unrequited love
For you.

Really like your poem sky! I think if you separated your poems into stanzas it would isolate your ideas and make them more presentable. I just chopped it up in a way I saw your poetic themes! thanks alot!