sheep dog
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RC- thanks for the feedback! I think i will re-work the poem more to show (Skips) personality traits. Ship was a name that came out of no where really, i could see it being a dogs name, but I agree it makes the poem rather confusing. I did a quick edit and plan on doing more
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sheep dog - by Bunx - 08-15-2013, 03:15 AM
RE: sheep dog - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-15-2013, 10:52 AM
RE: sheep dog - by SunRose - 08-15-2013, 11:28 AM
RE: sheep dog - by Bunx - 08-16-2013, 02:19 AM
RE: sheep dog - by ScurryFunger - 08-16-2013, 03:38 AM
RE: sheep dog - by Bunx - 08-16-2013, 04:12 AM



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