Capes and Causeways (first poem please critique)

[savino76]

Thanks so much for the tips. Here is a revised version, much more meaningful, I believe, of what I'm trying to communicate.
I know the structure can use some work, any tips on how to make it more appealing in that regard as well?

Thanks You!

Eastward we go
Toward the sultry shores
Lost in an unfamiliar land

Into the vast evening sky, I gaze
The moon
The stars
The satellites
All sad reminders of what used to be
From a Cape where we launched a New Frontier, into the Final Frontier

Across the bay from this Tropical Camelot, remnants of the past remain
The ebony launch towers whisper to us where we’ve been, and where we’re going.