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[animasrwm]

Hi Driguez this is coming across as a poem that has been put together to express emotions inside you but is not quite hitting the mark . There seems to be a tendency by you to try to structure your work around rhyming words instead of just writing what you feel inside. The main thing positive here is the fact that you picked up the pen as it were and have began to write. So well done . The fineness of writing will come through time .