Short Story: Yellow

[billy]

i had a quick read and will come back for another. id you mean scuffed or scoffed? near the beginning of the piece.
i had another quick read, it was scary shit the progression through the piece worked well. for some reason i presumed at the start that penn was a woman
i think yellow added to the snapshots, gave them an anchor of sorts that tied everything together. i liked it's dark down to earth humour