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Short Story: Yellow
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08-15-2013, 03:14 AM
very much enjoyed the smooth flow of this and the way you developed the charactors with such vivid images I also felt you over did the Yellow references at the start but theplot more than makes up for it loved the quirckness of cancer in the toe, but did you know that how Bob Marley died. Thanks TOMH
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Yellow - by newsclippings - 08-13-2013, 05:31 PM
RE: Yellow - by ChristopherSea - 08-13-2013, 10:21 PM
RE: Yellow - by newsclippings - 08-14-2013, 10:49 AM
RE: Yellow - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-14-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: Yellow - by newsclippings - 08-14-2013, 05:11 PM
RE: Yellow - by Keith - 08-15-2013, 03:14 AM
RE: Yellow - by newsclippings - 08-15-2013, 04:19 AM
RE: Yellow - by billy - 08-15-2013, 10:21 AM
RE: Yellow - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-15-2013, 10:26 AM
RE: Yellow - by billy - 08-15-2013, 01:31 PM
RE: Yellow - by milo - 08-15-2013, 01:55 PM
RE: Yellow - by newsclippings - 08-15-2013, 03:04 PM
RE: Yellow - by milo - 08-15-2013, 03:12 PM
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