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animasrwm,

Since you have so much trouble graciously accepting my critique, I will no longer offer any to you. All the best...-H

Good points, Fogglethorpe, as a reminder to posters in the critical forums:

Only post here if:
- you have read your poem and think it is free of basic errors --
- you post at least one considered, suitably detailed comment on someone else's poem in this or another critique forum before posting a poem of your own.
- you are ready to receive honest, detailed criticism of your poem
- you are prepared to accept advice and suggestions to edit your poem

Please remember that readers are doing you a favor. Ask for clarification by all means, but always graciously say thank you. If a reader finds problems with your writing, you should definitely consider how you can revise to improve, this is, after all, a work shopping forum.