Television
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His eyes don't really care
Words fall from his mouth
Are you listening to what you're saying? The abrupt shift from third to second person is distracting
Children are dying on tv! This line is not believable the second time either
Now where's my lotto ticket
The numbers will be on in a minute.
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Your over thinking it . See reply to post from Brunx

(08-13-2013, 04:44 AM)fogglethorpe Wrote:  
(08-13-2013, 03:14 AM)animasrwm Wrote:  I turn on my set
Children are dying on tv! Do you mean their deaths are being reported on tv? Or should I take this line literally?
Christ whats happening? You can afford to lose this line
Have we run out of reality tv shows? This rhetorical question seems extraneous
A news reader stares into the lens
His eyes don't really care
Words fall from his mouth
Are you listening to what you're saying? The abrupt shift from third to second person is distracting
Children are dying on tv! This line is not believable the second time either
Now where's my lotto ticket
The numbers will be on in a minute.
Over thinking it
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Messages In This Thread
Television - by animasrwm - 08-13-2013, 03:14 AM
RE: Television - by ellz483 - 08-13-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Television - by Bunx - 08-13-2013, 04:26 AM
RE: Television - by TheWall0912 - 08-13-2013, 08:42 PM
RE: Television - by animasrwm - 08-13-2013, 11:54 PM



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