08-11-2013, 09:30 AM
I think it's fair to say you've come of age with this one, Jack. I lose the meter ever so slightly in L7 but it's such a small hiccup that it becomes unnoticeable unless you're a bit of a nazi like me
, and it detracts not at all from the piece as a whole.
This is one of the finest blank verse sonnets I've encountered in recent years. It seamlessly mixes contemporary language and setting with traditional form and concept. Very well done indeed.
, and it detracts not at all from the piece as a whole.This is one of the finest blank verse sonnets I've encountered in recent years. It seamlessly mixes contemporary language and setting with traditional form and concept. Very well done indeed.
It could be worse
