Snail
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Louise, thanks for the feedback again! I used the word smiley to highlight the snail (in the poem) mischievous nature. Good catch on "pop" it means soda. I think pop it is a thing people just say in montana as well. I changed it up.
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Snail - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: Snail - by jdguyb - 08-08-2013, 05:34 AM
RE: Snail - by Volaticus - 08-08-2013, 11:55 AM
RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 12:49 PM
RE: Snail - by Volaticus - 08-08-2013, 01:23 PM
RE: Snail - by Peacheep - 08-08-2013, 01:12 PM
RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-09-2013, 09:25 AM
RE: Snail - by Volaticus - 08-09-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-10-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-16-2013, 02:26 AM
RE: Snail - by Keith - 08-20-2013, 09:30 AM
RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 12:46 AM



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