08-09-2013, 03:41 PM
(08-09-2013, 02:09 PM)billy Wrote: what is teeming greenness?Perhaps we should then change "verdure" to "manure."
is the pale blue palette the sky?
the last line does work, but gave me a little giggle as i wonder if he felt a fart coming on
the first two i have no suggestions as to how to improve them
I'll be there in a minute.