Haiku (Wind)

Haiku (Wind)

billy Offline

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08-09-2013, 02:09 PM (This post was last modified: 08-09-2013, 02:10 PM by billy.)

what is teeming greenness?
is the pale blue palette the sky?
the last line does work, but gave me a little giggle as i wonder if he felt a fart coming on Big Grin

the first two i have no suggestions as to how to improve them

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Haiku (Wind) - by mao - 08-09-2013, 11:01 AM

RE: Haiku (Wind) - by billy - 08-09-2013, 02:09 PM

RE: Haiku (Wind) - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 03:41 PM

RE: Haiku (Wind) - by rayheinrich - 08-09-2013, 03:37 PM

RE: Haiku (Wind) - by billy - 08-09-2013, 03:40 PM

RE: Haiku (Wind) - by rayheinrich - 08-09-2013, 04:30 PM

RE: Haiku (Wind) - by ChristopherSea - 08-11-2013, 08:35 AM

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