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Depression
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08-09-2013, 09:15 AM
The thing I noticed the most were the rhymes. They don't seem to follow any particular scheme, which I think wouldn't bother me, if only the rhymes were less forced. Which also detracts from the poem and the meaning, making the read-throughs less pleasant. IMHO. I don't mean to sound harsh.
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