08-08-2013, 11:07 AM
it's format is enough imagery and the way it's formatted is to resemble stairs, like a climbing pattern. More imagery would mean that I make it longer and it has a simple meaning, but I guess you were attracted to the third verse where it picks up a little, and it's good to know that people like that and want more of it. My other similar poems didn't get a lot of responses so I limited the imagery a bit, but it still is not watered down.

