Dreams
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it's format is enough imagery and the way it's formatted is to resemble stairs, like a climbing pattern. More imagery would mean that I make it longer and it has a simple meaning, but I guess you were attracted to the third verse where it picks up a little, and it's good to know that people like that and want more of it. My other similar poems didn't get a lot of responses so I limited the imagery a bit, but it still is not watered down.
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Dreams - by Green Ink - 08-08-2013, 05:42 AM
RE: Dreams - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-08-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: Dreams - by Green Ink - 08-08-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Dreams - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-08-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: Dreams - by billy - 08-08-2013, 12:00 PM
RE: Dreams - by Green Ink - 08-08-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: Dreams - by Green Ink - 08-08-2013, 12:06 PM
RE: Dreams - by billy - 08-08-2013, 05:37 PM



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