To Be English

To Be English

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08-08-2013, 05:57 AM

(08-07-2013, 11:39 PM)Heslopian Wrote: Thank you for your kind and thoughtful feedback, rayheinrich and Green Ink, I really like both of your suggestions, though I'll let this one rest for a bit before taking the scalpel to it again And thank you for your follow up, tectak

And thank you for your kind reply. After re-reading my above "criticism"
I apologize for wasting your space just to embarrass myself. Your poem
deserves more than my cursory, incorrect comment.
Sorry, Ray

all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?

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To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 10:26 AM

RE: To Be English - by Wildcard - 07-30-2013, 12:46 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 07:25 PM

RE: To Be English - by billy - 07-30-2013, 06:18 PM

RE: To Be English - by ray - 07-30-2013, 08:35 PM

RE: To Be English - by cidermaid - 07-30-2013, 08:46 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-30-2013, 10:19 PM

RE: To Be English - by billy - 07-31-2013, 10:48 AM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 07-31-2013, 10:58 PM

RE: To Be English - by serge gurkski - 08-04-2013, 02:19 PM

RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-05-2013, 07:48 AM

RE: To Be English - by ray - 08-05-2013, 06:55 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-05-2013, 10:06 PM

RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-05-2013, 11:56 PM

RE: To Be English - by StevieFinn - 08-06-2013, 07:49 AM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-06-2013, 08:48 AM

RE: To Be English - by billy - 08-06-2013, 09:43 AM

RE: To Be English - by Wildcard - 08-06-2013, 12:49 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-06-2013, 01:00 PM

RE: To Be English - by serge gurkski - 08-06-2013, 03:02 PM

RE: To Be English - by tectak - 08-06-2013, 10:35 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-07-2013, 03:08 AM

RE: To Be English - by rayheinrich - 08-07-2013, 05:16 AM

RE: To Be English - by Green Ink - 08-07-2013, 08:25 AM

RE: To Be English - by tectak - 08-07-2013, 04:53 PM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-07-2013, 11:39 PM

RE: To Be English - by rayheinrich - 08-08-2013, 05:57 AM

RE: To Be English - by heslopian - 08-08-2013, 06:12 AM

RE: To Be English - by Achebe - 06-30-2016, 07:08 PM

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