08-08-2013, 05:57 AM
(08-07-2013, 11:39 PM)Heslopian Wrote: Thank you for your kind and thoughtful feedback, rayheinrich and Green Ink, I really like both of your suggestions, though I'll let this one rest for a bit before taking the scalpel to it againAnd thank you for your kind reply. After re-reading my above "criticism"And thank you for your follow up, tectak
I apologize for wasting your space just to embarrass myself. Your poem
deserves more than my cursory, incorrect comment.
Sorry, Ray
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?


And thank 