08-08-2013, 05:33 AM
(08-08-2013, 05:09 AM)rowens Wrote: I think that some of your poems got passed over in the past for length, and lack of time by readers, and no other reasons. But now I see your last one in Mild has a critique.Thank you again rowens (of many words)
I read this poem, but since it's in fun, I went straight into talking instead of critiquing.
It has character, it has intelligence and understanding. From 1-10, I give it a 6, but I have superstitious ideas with numbers, so take that as meaning above Novice, and deserving of Serious Critique. I'll move it up to 7, since that's a good number too. Good and above average.
It's topical with the website reference at the end. But it shows style and attention to detail and an interesting personality talking.
You don't have much to worry about. Unless you are motivated by worry; and that's what I meant anyway, in a good way.
And I only have many stars because of quantity of words.
