Bird (edit 2)
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(08-08-2013, 03:00 AM)makeshift Wrote:  There was no mourning
for the bird this morning;good contrast in the word playing
Laying limp on the cross walk.

I simply passed him by.
Didn't bother with goodbye,
was in a hurry
on the fly;

as always.like this line because you directly relate yourself with the subject of this poem, the bird
I like this poem. Not only does it highlight how our deaths are as simple as a birds. It also highlights how insignificant death can be to us even though all of us wish we could fly like the birds.
anyways thanks for the poem
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Bird (edit 2) - by makeshift - 08-08-2013, 03:00 AM
RE: Bird - by TheWall0912 - 08-08-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-08-2013, 04:56 PM
RE: Bird - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: Bird - by Green Ink - 08-08-2013, 11:10 AM
RE: Bird - by milo - 08-08-2013, 11:14 AM
RE: Bird - by newsclippings - 08-08-2013, 05:22 PM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-08-2013, 06:04 PM
RE: Bird - by billy - 08-08-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-09-2013, 12:43 AM
RE: Bird - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 10:10 AM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-09-2013, 11:47 AM
RE: Bird - by newsclippings - 08-09-2013, 11:53 AM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-09-2013, 12:29 PM
RE: Bird - by milo - 08-09-2013, 12:41 PM
RE: Bird - by billy - 08-09-2013, 01:08 PM
RE: Bird - by tectak - 08-10-2013, 03:46 PM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-19-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-20-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-20-2013, 11:43 AM
RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-20-2013, 12:10 PM
RE: Bird - by ChristopherSea - 08-20-2013, 12:26 PM
RE: Bird - by milo - 08-20-2013, 11:57 AM
RE: Bird - by makeshift - 08-20-2013, 12:22 PM
RE: Bird edit 2 - by makeshift - 08-29-2013, 08:47 AM



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