08-08-2013, 03:39 AM
It has a few grammar errors. Some sentences made awkwardly for misguided poetic effect. Phrases like "it feels like utmost love", and "I draw my sword, the cleaver it is called" can be used with caution, or some weird sense of tone; but they don't come through, so there must not have been much caution, or sense to them.
Do you have something to say, or do you just want to make art? Both those ways can work. But if you just want to make art, you have to put a lot more effort into making it seem like you have something to say.
I suspect you do have something to say though. Most people do.
Do you have something to say, or do you just want to make art? Both those ways can work. But if you just want to make art, you have to put a lot more effort into making it seem like you have something to say.
I suspect you do have something to say though. Most people do.