I Smell Your Drunken Conscience (Working Title) EDIT 1

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I Smell Your Drunken Conscience (Working Title) EDIT 1

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08-08-2013, 02:13 AM

Well this poem is awesome. It made me laugh well done. Although the last rhyme does feel forced. I love the candid aspect of it. I really feel like your dealing with a whore. This is so funny I love it! Just change that last rhyme

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I Smell Your Drunken Conscience (Working Title) EDIT 1 - by TheWall0912 - 08-01-2013, 02:41 AM

RE: I Smell Your Drunken Conscious (Working Title) - by cidermaid - 08-01-2013, 05:45 AM

RE: I Smell Your Drunken Conscious (Working Title) - by TheWall0912 - 08-01-2013, 07:43 AM

RE: I Smell Your Drunken Conscious (Working Title) - by heslopian - 08-01-2013, 09:01 AM

RE: I Smell Your Drunken Conscious (Working Title) - by newsclippings - 08-01-2013, 11:05 AM

RE: I Smell Your Drunken Conscience (Working Title) EDIT 1 - by TheWall0912 - 08-07-2013, 09:57 PM

RE: I Smell Your Drunken Conscience (Working Title) EDIT 1 - by jdguyb - 08-08-2013, 02:13 AM

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