08-07-2013, 03:18 AM
The title of the poem makes me think of taking pills but the body of your poem has nothing to do with it. also the rhyming scheme is off.
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Take Your Pills - by Judgey - 08-06-2013, 10:11 PM
RE: Take Your Pills - by tectak - 08-06-2013, 11:50 PM
RE: Take Your Pills - by ScurryFunger - 08-07-2013, 10:17 PM
RE: Take Your Pills - by jdguyb - 08-07-2013, 03:18 AM
RE: Take Your Pills - by The Jester - 01-10-2014, 08:14 PM
RE: Take Your Pills - by Destructed - 01-11-2014, 10:08 AM
RE: Take Your Pills - by Blake - 01-14-2014, 02:39 AM
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