08-04-2013, 09:58 AM
This is by now a fairly old poem, serge, by which I mean I wrote it a few months ago, but thank you very much for your kind and insightful feedback, it's really appreciated
You're right, of course, about capitalising "Hell", but I like to describe it as a specific place, like Berlin or San Francisco, which I think capitalisation emphasises. JMHO, of course.
You're right, of course, about capitalising "Hell", but I like to describe it as a specific place, like Berlin or San Francisco, which I think capitalisation emphasises. JMHO, of course.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

