08-04-2013, 06:48 AM
Thank you for your kind and excellent feedback, tectak
I really appreciate it. For the record, every uncapitalised male pronoun refers to the father. Given that this is a first-person narrative and L5 suddenly switches to third, I see the confusion. In L4 of S4 ("I could not save...") where should the punctuation go?
I really appreciate it. For the record, every uncapitalised male pronoun refers to the father. Given that this is a first-person narrative and L5 suddenly switches to third, I see the confusion. In L4 of S4 ("I could not save...") where should the punctuation go?
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