08-01-2013, 04:02 PM
I am unsure what your thoughts are on the idea of showing your original work with this one or not (i would have liked to see the original posted to compare and see the direction you are taking). I enjoyed it on your first showing and from what I can recall of the original, I think this edit is reading even better.
I will try and come back to this later and will certainly be back for several more reads. I think this is an excellent piece with a rich and original story, told with insight and understanding on the subject which gives the poem a depth and credibility. Thanks for the read.
I will try and come back to this later and will certainly be back for several more reads. I think this is an excellent piece with a rich and original story, told with insight and understanding on the subject which gives the poem a depth and credibility. Thanks for the read.