Delete all Images

[tectak]

I like the form you make with the three dots. I don't like pictures very much, unless they're of pretty girls. And the conclusion seems too happy, even though it's not really, for me. That's all fine. But the other parts of the form, the meter and rhyming, all make it seem drawn out and artificial. Though I've been feeling that way about everything lately, in my war against art.

When I read it as two poems side by side though, I like it a little more. Especially the one on the right.

This has never happened before. You got it in one. Bugger. Yes. It is two poems, side by side. I hate art.
I figured this one out in an argument with myself. I saw myself taking pictures but wtf for? How long before a thing fresh in your mind changes in to a memory...I mean, have I got enought time left. I think I need to delete some images.
Just like half of it. That's pretty good.
Best,
tectak