Mentor: My special place

[milo]

okay, it def me, i want to share the closeness i feel to nature when i'm here, and the imparted serenity.
when will the edits start?

edits are not like instant pudding. First, I want to understand your intent, then I am going to read through it, and then I am going to ask you more questions. Our goal, hopefully, will be to match your poem to the intent. Just discussing it at all is fun and educational for me and I intend to stick around for a while . . .