07-31-2013, 11:04 AM
(07-31-2013, 10:52 AM)billy Wrote: i'd like to show a place i hold dear, to the reader. (and thanks for the mentoring) and in doing so show them the beauty of it without using the word beauty of those cliche thing everyone says they hate.ok, this is a good start. Remember, that even a vignette isn't about a place, it is about a person, just like every good poem is. Vignettes are actually about the narrator that is viewing the place. Are there any particulars you would like to communicate about your narrator? Who is he? How does this place affect him? Who is his audience? What is his motivation is communicating with his audience?