Standing Caravan

[dusboss]

First edit

Hollow and quiet this road became,
the higher force took its leg off the pedal
forgetting to put it back.
Now the standing caravan is full of children
who are waiting to be out and without restriction,
to see all of the colours that nature draws.
As lively as they might appear
caravan kids keep on failing
Every action is shattered
leaving no chance to succeed...

Original

Hollow and quiet this road became,
the higher force took its leg off the pedal
forgeting to take it back.
Now the standing caravan is full of children
who are waiting to be out and without restriction,
to see all of the colours that nature draws.
As lively as they might appear
caravan kids keep on failing
Every action is shattered
leaving no chance to succeed...