07-29-2013, 12:32 PM
I really like where you are going on this poem but it really needs punctuation to guide the reader... also, some of your questions could be said in a more eloquent way... but that's just my opinion 
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One more attempt
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One more attempt - by Ghassan - 07-28-2013, 08:53 AM
RE: One more attempt - by billy - 07-28-2013, 09:41 AM
RE: One more attempt - by jdguyb - 07-29-2013, 05:33 AM
RE: One more attempt - by TLAM4060 - 07-29-2013, 12:32 PM
RE: One more attempt - by billy - 07-29-2013, 03:55 PM
RE: One more attempt - by Ghassan - 07-29-2013, 08:45 PM
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