07-29-2013, 01:39 AM
(07-24-2013, 12:54 AM)DeviousKid45 Wrote: Granting you forgiveness, none,
For what matters most is what you've done,
Don't take it too kindly,
Thinking you'll ever get away,
But alas, you are sadly mistaken,
If you think that even for a moment,
That you will ever get away,the rhyme seems smooths but i am rushed to read all of this due to the fact that you are making one statement indicated by no periods in this first stanza. I wan't to get away from reading so fast. very batman esk
I am patient, no more,
Crime that you committed,
Cannot be pardoned,
Your soul will not have peace,
I will hunt you down even as you plead,
I have no mercy,
I do not forgive,So many I's in this stanza try replace I with He
I forget your crimes, not,
They are burned within my mind,
As I see the one I loved suffer,
From such an unspeakable sin,
How dare you even think,
That you could commit a crime,What crime? not sure to which you are referring to, speeding tickets?
Thinking it justified,
I say peace, not anymore,
I wage a war that destroys the world,innocent people included?
Hide, you coward, hide,
Run, you bastard, run,
Nothing on Earth,
Will restrain me,
Not even Death himself,
Your plea for mercy, denied,
I grant no forgiveness,
I grant no mercy,
I grant no relent,I am confused to the subject matter of the poem
For your crime is too great,
Such deed cannot be erased,
My rage cannot be replaced,
I murdered you,
For I don't forgive,
For I don't forget,
You deserve Death,
Not even ten years in prison,
Is deserving of your kind of sin,what again did the subject do?
I burned you,
And turn you to ash,
As you burn I spit in your face,
I stomp on your body,
As it was consumed by flames,
Of anger,
Of justice.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

