07-28-2013, 04:12 AM
Alright here's my knack at some real poetry. I'm going to dedicate a lot of time to this one I promise
Edit one!
I only hope our love can be sustained,
for it feels so true and good.
I know what it is like to be close to eternity,
because I have felt you
Dancing in the stars we create,
a new cosmos that anyone can relate.
It is a perfect love for me and you,
and I only hope that we can still find something new
And if the stars fail us one day,
may us create a new beacon of light.
One that frees all from the fray,
with our love the sustaining might.
I hope our love does not change at all.
Let it be as the leaves fall.
A love so true should never go to waste,
so hey write a song to copy and paste.
This love deserves recognition,
for it is too perfect not be known.
It is an epic flowing demonstration,
of the way the cosmos should be flown.
Our love
I only hope our love can be sustained
For it feels so true and good
I know what it is like to be close to eternity
Because I have felt you
Dancing in the stars we create
A new cosmos that anyone can relate
It is a perfect love for me and you
And I only hope that we can still find something new
And if the stars fail us one day
May us create a new beacon of light
One that frees all from the fray
With our love the sustaining might
May our light never change a bit
For if it does I may have a fit
A love so true should never go to waste
So hey write a song to copy and paste
This love deserves recognition
For it is too perfect not be known
It is an epic flowing demonstration
Of the way the cosmos should be flown
Honest feed back please. I actually read this one aloud to test it and I think it flows nicely. Please give me some feedback
Edit one!
I only hope our love can be sustained,
for it feels so true and good.
I know what it is like to be close to eternity,
because I have felt you
Dancing in the stars we create,
a new cosmos that anyone can relate.
It is a perfect love for me and you,
and I only hope that we can still find something new
And if the stars fail us one day,
may us create a new beacon of light.
One that frees all from the fray,
with our love the sustaining might.
I hope our love does not change at all.
Let it be as the leaves fall.
A love so true should never go to waste,
so hey write a song to copy and paste.
This love deserves recognition,
for it is too perfect not be known.
It is an epic flowing demonstration,
of the way the cosmos should be flown.
Our love
I only hope our love can be sustained
For it feels so true and good
I know what it is like to be close to eternity
Because I have felt you
Dancing in the stars we create
A new cosmos that anyone can relate
It is a perfect love for me and you
And I only hope that we can still find something new
And if the stars fail us one day
May us create a new beacon of light
One that frees all from the fray
With our love the sustaining might
May our light never change a bit
For if it does I may have a fit
A love so true should never go to waste
So hey write a song to copy and paste
This love deserves recognition
For it is too perfect not be known
It is an epic flowing demonstration
Of the way the cosmos should be flown
Honest feed back please. I actually read this one aloud to test it and I think it flows nicely. Please give me some feedback