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07-27-2013, 10:22 PM
(07-27-2013, 10:20 PM)rowens Wrote: You could try to say more with the subject without being controlled by the end rhymes. Smooth out the sentences, then work on giving rhymes to the lines. Rhymes that feel less forced, and more natural.Thanks.. I shall work on it and repost it soon, really looking forward to getting more tips from you and everyone else.. |
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Last words... - by Ghassan - 07-27-2013, 10:05 PM
RE: Last words... - by rowens - 07-27-2013, 10:13 PM
RE: Last words... - by Ghassan - 07-27-2013, 10:15 PM
RE: Last words... - by Malu - 09-13-2013, 03:46 PM
RE: Last words... - by rowens - 07-27-2013, 10:20 PM
RE: Last words... - by Ghassan - 07-27-2013, 10:22 PM
RE: Last words... - by jdguyb - 07-28-2013, 03:55 AM
RE: Last words... - by Ghassan - 07-28-2013, 04:06 AM
RE: Last words... - by ellajam - 09-13-2013, 10:25 PM
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