07-27-2013, 10:05 PM
Dear forum members, this is my first poem, constructive criticism of all sorts is warmly welcomed. Thank you.
You are probably on your way
I had wishes that longer you would stay
and once again on the grass we could lay
but hey, those are the words I want to say
from the heart I want to state
the meaning of my words please don't underestimate
when you feel down think about me
smile, relax and meditate
from the confusion and low lives of this world
my dear levitate
If it is hard to comprehend I can translate
and until one day we can set it straight,
I can only hope that one day we can meet
I really hope you can relate
My love for you I hope I was able to demonstrate
so to everybody else don't compare me,
I am only human, so don't exaggerate
with prosperity I hope your life you will populate
and the restless soul within,
you will emancipate
take care and the pride inside please
don't let to waste.......
You are probably on your way
I had wishes that longer you would stay
and once again on the grass we could lay
but hey, those are the words I want to say
from the heart I want to state
the meaning of my words please don't underestimate
when you feel down think about me
smile, relax and meditate
from the confusion and low lives of this world
my dear levitate
If it is hard to comprehend I can translate
and until one day we can set it straight,
I can only hope that one day we can meet
I really hope you can relate
My love for you I hope I was able to demonstrate
so to everybody else don't compare me,
I am only human, so don't exaggerate
with prosperity I hope your life you will populate
and the restless soul within,
you will emancipate
take care and the pride inside please
don't let to waste.......