The Lonely Artist
#6
That the artist is recreating himself and giving it away is evident and nicely done.

The method of capitalization has a random feeling and I think you'd be better to just capitalize properly-- or even capitalize the start of every line, but it needs to be more consistent. For example:

Quote:Being an artist requires suicide,
after each stroke of the paint brush. --lowercase start mid-sentence
And after each new pencil tip, canvas, or sculpture,
An artist must be reborn. --uppercase start mid-sentence



All-in-all, I thought that it felt fresh the way you said what I have often thought in a new way: My gift is my curse.

Thanks for sharing Smile


Messages In This Thread
The Lonely Artist - by TheWall0912 - 07-24-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by Volaticus - 07-24-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by jdguyb - 07-26-2013, 02:31 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by Tbirabent - 07-26-2013, 07:26 PM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by milo - 07-27-2013, 06:45 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by Wildcard - 07-27-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by dusboss - 07-29-2013, 08:56 PM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by newsclippings - 07-29-2013, 09:21 PM



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