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The Lonely Artist
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07-27-2013, 06:45 AM
(07-26-2013, 07:26 PM)Tbirabent Wrote: I can never really get the right message without my poems rhyming but you do it quite well, beautiful poetrythis is not considered valid crit for the feed back forums. You have one comment about yourself with "beautiful poetry" tacked on the end of it. Try to point out what you thought worked or didn't work, what made it "beautiful". Use specific examples from the poem itself. /mod |
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The Lonely Artist - by TheWall0912 - 07-24-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by Volaticus - 07-24-2013, 11:00 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by jdguyb - 07-26-2013, 02:31 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by Tbirabent - 07-26-2013, 07:26 PM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by milo - 07-27-2013, 06:45 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by Wildcard - 07-27-2013, 10:55 AM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by dusboss - 07-29-2013, 08:56 PM
RE: The Lonely Artist - by newsclippings - 07-29-2013, 09:21 PM
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