The Lonely Artist

[jdguyb]

Is the message your trying to convey that after each project an artist must be reborn? I think it is. Nice poem. I love the fact that you say an artist must kill themselves before each project. I agree with volaticus here. The commas need to go. But otherwise great poem man. I just hope you don't literally kill yourself after each project. That would be a shame. The poem seems dark and light at the same time like your saving the reader from something. There's a sense of satisfaction at the end of the poem. The end of the poem fills me with joy. Thanks for posting