07-25-2013, 03:22 AM
I don't know what to say. This poem flows kinda weird and I don't understand where the final two lines fit in with the rest of the poem. The last two lines seem kind of random.
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Bintan
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RE: Bintan - by abu nuwas - 07-24-2013, 06:14 PM
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